Today we workded on improving the Persuasive essay.
- Is the thesis clear and STRONG?
- Have you provided support for each point that will prove your point.
- Don't only rely on putting your source information with a cite name and number page at the end.
Use variety of style: begin by introducing the source, the credentials, the source of the information you will be using; it easier to read. Don't forget to use the Citation Sandwich: Imperative
Hand in the revision of this essay for me to review and provide commentary.