Thursday, October 22, 2009

October 22 In Class

Today we workded on improving the Persuasive essay.
- Is the thesis clear and STRONG?

- Have you provided support for each point that will prove your point.

- Don't only rely on putting your source information with a cite name and number page at the end.

Use variety of style: begin by introducing the source, the credentials, the source of the information you will be using; it easier to read. Don't forget to use the Citation Sandwich: Imperative

Hand in the revision of this essay for me to review and provide commentary.


  1. RE: Comment above: How about using the English language we use in class. This is a great opp for class conversation!! MAC